Here It Is!

Before you read this, you might want to read the last post. This post was intended for the last one, but I made a slight error, so today is the day I'm posting it. It is a mash-up of Jason Derulo's "Whatcha Say" and Moby's "Disco Lies." If it is highlighted in red, it's the girl. If it's highlighted in blue, it's the boy. Purple is the backround singers. Lyrics might also have been altered slightly.

(Girl)

Mmm whatcha say?

Oooo “that you only meant well?”

Well, of course you did.

Mmm whatcha say?

“That it’s all for the best?”

Of course it is…

Not.

You said you want me, but that was just a lie!

(Just a lie, just a lie.)

You said you love me, but that was just a lie!

(Just a lie, just a lie.)

All I wanted was someone who could keep me warm at night.

You tried it baby but it didn’t work. And now I know that this is gonna be the end!

Oh, how could you lie?

Oh, how could you lie?

(Boy)

I was so wrong for so long, only trying to please myself.

Girl, I was caught up in her lust, when I don’t really want no one else.

So no! (To girl two)

I know I should’ve treated you better, but me and you were meant to last forever.

So take my hand. Give me another chance to really be your man.

Cause when the roof caved in and the truth came out, I just didn’t know what to do!

But when I become a star, we’ll be living so large! I’ll do anything for you!

Forgive me girl.

(Girl)

You said you need me, but that was just a lie!

(Just a lie, just a lie!)

You said the truth once, but that was just a lie!

(Just a lie, just a lie!)

All I wanted was someone who could keep me warm at night!

You tried it baby but it didn’t work. And now I know that this is gonna be the end!

Oh, how could you lie?

Oh, how could you lie?

(Boy)

How could I live with myself knowing that I let our love go?

And oh, what I’d do with one chance!

I just gotta let you know.

I know what I did wasn’t clever, but me and you were meant to be together!

So take my hand, give me another chance to really be your man!

Cause when the roof caved in and the truth came out, I just didn’t know what to do!

But when I become a star, we’ll be living so large! I’ll do anything for you!

Forgive me girl.

(Girl)

All I wanted was someone who could keep me warm at night.

You tried it baby, but it didn’t work. And know I know that this is gonna be the end!

Oh, how could you lie?

(Boy)

Girl, tell me what to say!

I don’t want you to leave me, though you caught me cheating!

Tell me, tell me what to say!

I really need in my life cause things ain’t right!

Girl, tell me what to say!

I don’t want you to leave me, though you caught me cheating!

Tell me, tell me what to say!

I really need in my life cause things ain’t right!

Cause when the roof caved in, and the truth came out, I just didn’t know what to do!

But when I become a star, we’ll be living so large! I’ll do anything for you!

Come with me girl.

(Girl)

You said you want me, but that was just a lie!

(Just a lie, just a lie!)

You said you love me, but that was just a lie!

(Just a lie, just a lie!)

You said you need me, but that was just a lie!

(Just a lie, just a lie!)

You said the truth once, but that was just a lie!

(Just a lie, just a lie!)

Mmm whatcha say?

Oooo “that you only meant well?”

(Of course I did!)

Oh no you didn’t!.

Mmm whatcha say?

“That it’s all for the best?”

Well, that is a lie!

(It Ain’t!)

All I wanted was someone who I could trust on through the night!

You tried it baby but it didn’t work! And now I know that this is gonna be the end!

So, this is goodbye.

(Give me another chance!)

No, this is goodbye!

(Forgive me girl!)

This really is the end!

Forever Goodbye!

(Boy)

Mmm, whatcha say?

Ooo, that “this is the end?”

Well, of course you did.

Mmm, whatcha say?

“That, this is goodbye?”

Don’t wanna say goodbye.

I think this may need a little more background singer lyrics, but those lyrics are clearly heard in the song. Plus, it makes it a little creepy/angry. It may also need some dialog throughout it. I'm thinking it may also need a little bit less repetitiveness from the girl. Any suggestions to make this better would help.